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A day will come when I’ll open my wings
A day when I’ll not listen to a single thing.
I have had enough, enough of sorrow
But I look forward for a better tomorrow.
All those things spoken between you and me
Sounds like a lie, like a ridicule to me
If you have thought I am a bird with broken wings
Then you will be sorry to see me break all strings.
I will fly away, one day, high above the blue sea
With wind beneath my wings, yes, I want to be free.
Leave a comment below if you liked the poem, it will inspire me to pen down some more! 



Tina Basu

9 Comments on I want to be Free

  1. S Jayanth
    August 18, 2012 at 3:57 pm (4 years ago)

    wonderful.. and 'liberating'.
    loved it. 🙂 i loved the theme. 🙂 glad i stopped by. and i am also happy and glad to tell you that i too wrote 1-2 poems about 'flying'.
    😉

    if you do find time,
    stop by here, you might fly higher 🙂

    Jump First If You Want To Fly
    The Scarlet Bond

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  2. Tina Basu
    August 18, 2012 at 4:55 pm (4 years ago)

    thnks jayanth… surely will check out

    Reply
  3. sathish kumar
    August 18, 2012 at 5:46 pm (4 years ago)

    "If you have thought I am a bird with broken wings
    Then you will be sorry to see me break all strings." Loved this line Tina. Nice.

    Reply
  4. Tina Basu
    August 18, 2012 at 5:48 pm (4 years ago)

    thnks Sathish

    Reply
  5. Arindam
    August 21, 2012 at 11:35 am (4 years ago)

    Beautifully written poem. Your words are very inspiring and powerful. Liked this one a lot. Really nice work.

    Reply
  6. Tina Basu
    August 21, 2012 at 11:35 am (4 years ago)

    @ Arindam – thanks 🙂

    Reply

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