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Five Sentence Fiction – Sound Sleep

by Tina Basu March 12, 2015

written by Tina Basu March 12, 2015

Writing a tiny fiction after a long time. Hope you’ll like it.

I have not written these five sentence fictions for sometime.

But since I am back on my second spell I hope to not take a break again too soon. Not in next 2-3 months at least! So go on, read and enjoy.

SOUND SLEEP

For some moments Hazel couldn’t believe what lay in front of her, when she returned from the store.

She couldn’t fathom who could do this to her.

Her son Rowan was too little to do something as crazy as this, then who could it be?

And then she spotted Mr. Teddy happily sleeping on the couch as if nothing had happened, but the fallen confetti on his head gave his story away.

“Teddy, you just spoiledmy entire Christmas decoration and you’re happily snoring…wake up now”.

Image Source: Lillie McFerrin

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This post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt SPOILED.

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Tina Basu

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Ankita March 12, 2015 - 2:59 pm

hehehe! cute 🙂

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Soumya March 13, 2015 - 7:10 am

Super cute this one 🙂

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bellybytes March 13, 2015 - 7:48 am

what a sweet little story!Perfectly kept the suspense till the end.

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Tina Basu March 13, 2015 - 7:58 am

Thanks Ankita

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Tina Basu March 13, 2015 - 7:58 am

Thanks Soumya.

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Tina Basu March 13, 2015 - 7:59 am

Thank you Bellybytes, glad you liked it.

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Anita March 18, 2015 - 8:55 am

We don't want such spoilsports!
cute pic😊

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