Writing a tiny fiction after a long time. Hope you’ll like it. 

I have not written these five sentence fictions for sometime. 

But since I am back on my second spell I hope to not take a break again too soon. Not in next 2-3 months at least! So go on, read and enjoy.  


For some moments Hazel couldn’t believe what lay in front of her, when she returned from the store.

She couldn’t fathom who could do this to her.

Her son Rowan was too little to do something as crazy as this, then who could it be?

And then she spotted Mr. Teddy happily sleeping on the couch as if nothing had happened, but the fallen confetti on his head gave his story away.

“Teddy, you just spoiledmy entire Christmas decoration and you’re happily snoring…wake up now”.

Image Source: Lillie McFerrin

This post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt SPOILED. 

Tina Basu

7 Comments on Five Sentence Fiction – Sound Sleep

  1. Ankita
    March 12, 2015 at 2:59 pm (4 years ago)

    hehehe! cute 🙂

  2. Soumya
    March 13, 2015 at 7:10 am (4 years ago)

    Super cute this one 🙂

  3. bellybytes
    March 13, 2015 at 7:48 am (4 years ago)

    what a sweet little story!Perfectly kept the suspense till the end.

  4. Tina Basu
    March 13, 2015 at 7:58 am (4 years ago)

    Thanks Ankita

  5. Tina Basu
    March 13, 2015 at 7:58 am (4 years ago)

    Thanks Soumya.

  6. Tina Basu
    March 13, 2015 at 7:59 am (4 years ago)

    Thank you Bellybytes, glad you liked it.

  7. Anita
    March 18, 2015 at 8:55 am (4 years ago)

    We don't want such spoilsports!
    cute pic😊


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