This is my first attempt at the 55Fiction. So if it’s bad or not making much sense then apologies.

Don’t know how it’s going to shape up. I hope to continue writing more of these. If you like it please leave a comment 🙂 If you don’t like it then also leave a comment and let me know how bad I have been with it 🙂

“Why is it dark?

Couldn’t you pay the bill?

What do you do the entire day you useless woman?”
Screamed an irritated Animesh while entering his apartment in his usual late hours.
“Sorry, I wanted to wish you happy anniversary”, said a sad Seema lighting the candles which she had decorated the room with.

Tina Basu

6 Comments on 55 Fiction Friday – Happy Anniversary

  1. sibi
    June 16, 2012 at 7:04 am (4 years ago)

    Excellent! Happens in real life many times. We fail to see the light at the end of the tunnel!

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  2. ritesh
    June 16, 2012 at 9:34 am (4 years ago)

    This was really good Tina

    Reply
  3. TTT
    June 17, 2012 at 9:09 am (4 years ago)

    A good one Tina …Sometimes surprises just backfire …

    Reply
  4. Deepansh Khurana
    June 17, 2012 at 9:10 am (4 years ago)

    Beautiful. 🙂 Very creative and precise for your first attempt. 🙂 Seriously Impressed.

    Reply
  5. Tina Basu
    June 17, 2012 at 9:11 am (4 years ago)

    Thank u everyone…. hope to continue this section

    Reply
  6. Dr Roshan
    June 17, 2012 at 9:11 am (4 years ago)

    nice.. sadly true many a time, but nice nonetheless 🙂

    Reply

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