I’m trying to keep up on the fiction challenge for this month. Today I’ll post using the photo prompt at Friday Fictioneers by Rochelle Wisoff -Fields

I haven’t posted here for long while I was in my slumber. And before I get into hibernation again I better make good use of the time I have in hand!


So here’s the photo prompt followed by my 100 word story.




PHOTO PROMPT © C. Hase


I’ll be Free

Not a single person… no visitor!

This is how they treat their princess!

No attendants, no men around.

Doesn’t anyone remember the time when princes and kings flocked my court?

There wasn’t a single damsel more beautiful in the world. And they dared to call me evil?

They were jealous… wretched jealous hidebound priests.

Look at me… my beauty still knows no bounds…not even after thousand years.

You cannot keep me chained here in this isle forever.

I’ll break the shackles… I’ll be free… I’ll wait as long as it takes someone to land here… but I’ll be free.


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Word Count – 99

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This Fantasy Fiction is written for Friday Fictioneers by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Also linking it to UBC Day 5

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Tina Basu

22 Comments on 100 Word Story – I’ll Be Free

  1. Francene Stanley
    June 5, 2015 at 5:34 pm (2 years ago)

    Love this story brought about by the photo prompt. Well done.

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  2. Tarang Sinha
    June 5, 2015 at 5:57 pm (2 years ago)

    Nice take on the prompt! 🙂

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  3. Coach Donna Ward
    June 5, 2015 at 5:58 pm (2 years ago)

    Beautiful inspirational writing – and the image is amazing, even more so after reading your 100 word story

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  4. Tina Basu
    June 5, 2015 at 5:59 pm (2 years ago)

    Thanks Francene

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  5. Tina Basu
    June 5, 2015 at 6:01 pm (2 years ago)

    Thank you so much Donna, thanks for dropping by

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  6. plaridel
    June 6, 2015 at 12:13 am (2 years ago)

    it will be a different world then when she earns her freedom. hope she gets used to it.

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  7. PerfectlySanta
    June 6, 2015 at 2:39 am (2 years ago)

    Wow, that's awesome! I could this in my mind. I'd love to read a short story based on this prompt. 🙂

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  8. Tina Basu
    June 6, 2015 at 4:57 am (2 years ago)

    Thanks for your appreciation Perfectly Santa. Maybe I'll develop it in a story one day

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  9. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
    June 6, 2015 at 2:46 pm (2 years ago)

    Dear Tina,

    I don't think it's a good idea to set this being free. Good story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    PS There's no 'e' in Wisoff.

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  10. Tina Basu
    June 7, 2015 at 8:38 am (2 years ago)

    Yeah no way it can be set free.
    Thanks
    And so sorry for the extra e!

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  11. Ga H
    June 7, 2015 at 10:45 pm (2 years ago)

    I was wondering what kind of princess this is, being shackled for so long. Maybe a dragon, a goddess, a monster? Very intriguing, great story.

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  12. abodeofhorus
    June 9, 2015 at 9:05 am (1 year ago)

    That raises lots of question about the princess! Nicely done Tina !

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  13. Vinay Leo R.
    June 9, 2015 at 12:24 pm (1 year ago)

    Don't do it, Tina. Don't set her free. There's enough evil in the world without adding one more 🙂

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  14. Tina Basu
    June 9, 2015 at 12:26 pm (1 year ago)

    She is some kind of an evil spirit of an evil princess

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  15. Tina Basu
    June 9, 2015 at 12:27 pm (1 year ago)

    Yup not setting her free for sure

    Reply

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