She stood still outside the room…

It was only a few hours back that she saw him leave for work…

And now it’s all over. Mike left without telling her a good bye.

Her world stood still midst the cacophony of the hospital…

Only if he had not gone out today he could have escaped the shooting at the school.   

Linking this post as my entry to the ABC WednesdayC is for Cacophony
Also linking this post as my Day 29 post for Ultimate Blog Challenge July 2014.

Tina Basu

6 Comments on The Cacophony

  1. ChrisJ
    July 31, 2014 at 6:23 pm (5 years ago)

    Such A good word. I remember specifically learning that word when I was about 12 years old, 65 years ago! I thought it was a good descriptive word. It has a nice sound to it as opposed to its meaning. It is certainly a good description of hospitals where the noise is full of buzzes, beeps and doors banging.

  2. Carver
    July 31, 2014 at 9:31 pm (5 years ago)

    Very poignant. Carver, ABC-Wed. Team

  3. Roger Owen Green
    August 2, 2014 at 2:21 pm (5 years ago)

    Great word! I try to shut it out of my life, often unsuccessfully.


  4. Dilip Patel
    August 3, 2014 at 12:49 am (5 years ago)

    Very well described, Tina.

  5. Beloo Mehra
    August 4, 2014 at 7:41 am (5 years ago)

    O that's a sad tale of chance and irreplaceable loss. Nicely penned!


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