If you are in Bangalore you must be enjoying the beautiful weather. I simply love it. Just went out in the afternoon for lunch and experienced the cold shower. There’s a certain charm in getting drenched in the rain. Sometimes I feel like rolling down the window to let some rain in. 

Now since the weather here is so romantic, I want to write a romance fiction, so here’s a romantic flash fiction for Lillie’s prompt.

Will it be a yes?

The otherwise confident and uber cool Ethan felt butterflies flying in his stomach today.

He was nervous… he had felt it from the heart this time, this was not a casual attraction.

He knew she is the one… she is the one with whom he wanted to grow old with.

Will she say a yes…. What if she rejects… for the very first time he had written this letter with all his heart…

He saw her entering the river deck at a distance… his heart skipped a beat… his eyes lit up when her luminoussmile gave away her answer… yes… she will say yes… Ethan knew it inside.   

source: http://www.picturesocial.com
This post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt LUMINOUS.  

Also linking this to Write Tribe Pro Blogger Challenge as my Day 8 post

Tina Basu

10 Comments on Five Sentence Fiction – Will it be a yes?

  1. Anmol Rawat
    August 8, 2014 at 11:55 pm (5 years ago)

    Sweet one 🙂 Everybody deserves to hear a yes 🙂

  2. Usha Menon
    August 9, 2014 at 7:29 am (5 years ago)

    Good that he saw positive vibes. Cute story.

  3. Usha Menon
    August 9, 2014 at 7:29 am (5 years ago)

    Very cute! Loved reading it.

  4. Vinitha
    August 9, 2014 at 12:55 pm (5 years ago)

    Cute story Tina…

  5. blackbeauty
    August 9, 2014 at 1:19 pm (5 years ago)

    the heart knows… nice story.

  6. ruchi2312
    August 10, 2014 at 1:55 am (5 years ago)

    cute one 🙂 cheers to love!

  7. Vidhya Rao - Paint My Word
    August 10, 2014 at 1:55 am (5 years ago)

    I am glad it has an happy ending…BTW on the prompt link you have mentioned :
    This post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt SECURE.

    You may want to correct that to "Luminous"

  8. taleoftwotomatoes
    August 10, 2014 at 3:30 pm (5 years ago)

    Aww.. that's so sweet 🙂 Lovely story, Tina!!

  9. Beloo Mehra
    August 16, 2014 at 5:58 am (5 years ago)

    A sweet story. Like the expression – Luminous smile 🙂


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