Time for some fiction in the blog. I am thinking of taking up a 30 day fiction challenge for this month. Let’s see how fruitful it can be. Wish me luck. Today it’s going to be a Five Sentence Fiction based on the prompt from Lillie from
Lillie McFerrin Writes – House of Five Sentence Fiction.
And how does it work – you need to write a fiction story in FIVE sentences. – short and sweet. Let’s go for it.
Looking out
“What Mr. Pibbs… don’t pull me, leave me alone, can you?”
Three days in a row Ella hadn’t left her bed, she didn’t feel like doing anything, not after what Connor did to her… how could he call off their wedding just a week before the D-Day!
“Time for your food, eh?”
If not for Mr. Pibbs she would have starved herself to death in the last three days, with the single thought in her mind.
She got up and stood near her huge window… ‘what a bright fresh day’ she thought picking up Mr. Pibbs in her arms… a day to re-start perhaps, no more wasting tears for that jerk, she was now sure of it, ‘thank you my love’ she said planting a kiss on the thick fur of Mr. Pibbs.
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| Photo Courtesy – WiseGeek |
Today’s prompt – FRESH
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Linking this post to FSF @ Lillie McFerrin and Ultra Blog Challenge Day 1.
I am participating in Write Tribe festival of words #4 Post written for DAY 4 Topic: Being Human – writing an inspirational post.
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48 comments
This is an excellent example and exercise to improve my writing in all areas – I am going to be saving this as a reminder – thank you 🙂
Hi Tina 🙂
Love your blog! My first time there 🙂 Enjoyed this post very much, thanks for sharing your thoughts!! Have a great day 🙂
Small yet poignant story. Loved it Tina.
Glad she had at least Mr. Pibbs.
Welcome back to writing 🙂
Nice and fresh post.
Glad mr. Pibbs was there for her 🙂
You are welcome Donna thanks for dropping by
Thanks Joan thanks for dropping by. Hope to see you soon again
Thanks Preethi. Yes Mr. Pibbs, true friend
Thanks Anmol,hope to write more
Cute story. Was Mr. Pibbs a dog or cat? Sweet story. 😉
Very refreshingly different…great post…look forward to see more 🙂
Mr. Pibbs is a fuzzy lil cat, girls best friend!
Thanks for dropping by Esha
Mr.Pibbs seem to be cute!! Way to go 🙂
Lovely! Pets are wonderful. 🙂
It's wise to leave the excess baggage behind and take a fresh start.
Yes you've done the right thing.
YAY! That's a hard challenge to conquer and you did it in flying colors 😀
I've never done one of the five sentence fiction memes. However, I want to stretch myself and try new things on my blog. I think I may give this a try just to see how well I will do. Alana ramblinwitham.blogspot.com
Great job! A short little story, but you packed a lot of emotion in there.
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They are true friends,aren't they?
Thanks Red Handed
True moving ahead in life is important. Thanks for dropping by.
Thanks Ranu.
Definitely hard but one needs to move forward. Thanks proud momma of girls
I'm sure you will enjoy it Alana
Thank you Barbara. Thanks for dropping by.
Good story that could be a true story. Love that Mr. Pibbs saved her. Our fur friends and family often do that.
Very true Patricia, our fur friends are often our besties
Pets are adorable, and a life saver at times. She is lucky to have Mr.Pibbs in her life. Cute story, Tina. 🙂
A very refreshing tale :-).
Chuckle. You cheated and used a comma to link two sentences. But, your words did the job of sharing a story in almost five sentences.
The ending was a surprise. A very good read 🙂
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Thanks Vintage, pets are awesome
Thanks Sweety
That much freedom is granted, thanks for dropping by
Thanks Sushree
I have a cat myself, so I understand! Nice story, with a happy ending – appropriate for the sunny side of life!
Tina, you conveyed so much writing so little . I loved it 🙂
These are wonderful 5 sentences. I will give it a try too. All the best for the month of fiction.
There is nothing like the love and comfort of a fur-child 🙂
Oh very nice story!
Thanks Smith
Thanks Rashmi glad you liked it
Thank you so much Inderpreet
Very true Janine
Thanks Vyomi
Loved the narrative, whoever may the pet be.
Thanks Ajai, the pet however is a little cat