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This post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt LUMINOUS.
If you are in Bangalore you must be enjoying the beautiful weather. I simply love it. Just went out in the afternoon for lunch and experienced the cold shower. There’s a certain charm in getting drenched in the rain. Sometimes I feel like rolling down the window to let some rain in.
Now since the weather here is so romantic, I want to write a romance fiction, so here’s a romantic flash fiction for Lillie’s prompt.
Will it be a yes?
The otherwise confident and uber cool Ethan felt butterflies flying in his stomach today.
He was nervous… he had felt it from the heart this time, this was not a casual attraction.
He knew she is the one… she is the one with whom he wanted to grow old with.
Will she say a yes…. What if she rejects… for the very first time he had written this letter with all his heart…
He saw her entering the river deck at a distance… his heart skipped a beat… his eyes lit up when her luminoussmile gave away her answer… yes… she will say yes… Ethan knew it inside.
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Also linking this to Write Tribe Pro Blogger Challenge as my Day 8 post
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10 comments
Sweet one 🙂 Everybody deserves to hear a yes 🙂
Good that he saw positive vibes. Cute story.
Very cute! Loved reading it.
Cute story Tina…
the heart knows… nice story.
cute one 🙂 cheers to love!
I am glad it has an happy ending…BTW on the prompt link you have mentioned :
This post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt SECURE.
You may want to correct that to "Luminous"
Aww.. that's so sweet 🙂 Lovely story, Tina!!
The heart knows it always, doesn't it?
Random Thoughts Naba – The Weekend Roundup…
A sweet story. Like the expression – Luminous smile 🙂