Home Fiction & Writing#FridayFotoFictionThe Demon – Fiction Writing Challenge – #FridayFotoFiction Oct 20-25

The Demon – Fiction Writing Challenge – #FridayFotoFiction Oct 20-25

by tinabasu
fiction writing vchallenge #FridayFotoFIction prompt

Friday Foto Fiction is a weekly fiction writing challenge where we give you a photo prompt and ask you to write a 100-150 word flash fiction about it.

Hello, beautiful people, are you having a great Diwali? How was your Diwali? Did you burst loads of crackers? There’s always time for #FridayFotoFiction and fiction writing challenge if you are bored of the celebrations anytime! Fiction Writing Challenge always helps. So let’s go to prompt right away.

Fiction Writing Challenge – #FridayFotoFiction Oct20-25 Prompt

fiction writing vchallenge #FridayFotoFIction prompt
Did you Know? This was the Top Post on Indiblogger on Oct25th and trending on homepage!
Top post on IndiBlogger, the biggest community of Indian Bloggers

The Demon – Fiction Writing Challenge – #FridayFotoFiction

She can breathe now. She was free.

Free from the clutches of the demon.

Years of agony had made her a stone.

If they want to take me away – so be it. If they hang me now – so be it. I have nothing to lose anymore. She thought as she sat amidst the ruins.

When he entered the room tonight, drunk, she knew she could do it today. All she needed was the lighter! She was lucky he was completely sloshed today while he forced himself on her, yet again.

For a minute she managed to gather enough strength to strangle him with her shackles. As he burnt in the fire, she let out a scream. She had finally defeated the demon, the demon who was her father. The demon who kept her alive in restraints in the cellar for seven years! Seven years that ruined her life forever.

©Tina Basu

Word Count – 150

#FridayFotoFiction Featured Blogger Oct 13-18

Last week we had 11 wonderful stories in the #FridayFotoFiction Fiction Writing Challenge. We, without a doubt love reading through them. But we do pick up a featured blogger every week.

The featured blogger for Oct- 13-18 is Monika from AluBhujia. Like her wonderful blog’s name, she has been sending us spicy fiction pieces almost every week.

Monika is a teacher, homemaker and a mom. She loves writing amidst the daily routine work. And we already love her blog! Read her featured post Car Parking.

Congratulations Monika.

How to participate in #FridayFotoFiction Flash Fiction Writing Challenge

  1. Follow  &  , your hosts for , on Twitter.
  2. Every Thursday evening Tina and Mayuri will share a Photo Prompt with you on Twitter and on their respective blogs.
  3. Write a 100-150 Word story based on or relevant to the given Photo Prompt.
  4. Use the  badge at the end of your posts.
  5. Link up with Tina or Mayuri
  6. Read, comment, share on the host and co-hosts posts and at least two more posts linked in the party.
    Pro Tip – Networking and commenting are good for your blog’s health and ranks.
  7. Use  in your post and share in on social media using the same hashtag.
  8. Every week Tina and Mayuri will pick one featured blogger whose post impressed them the most.
  9. Every month one winner will be picked from the participants. This winner will be picked on the basis of regular participation through the month and will win a cash voucher from Amazon.
  10. Keep your fictions and engagement civil. Adult content/ affiliated links/ derogatory remarks/ hatred towards any religion is not allowed.

Grab the Badge

Tina Basu
   

You may also like

18 comments

Monika October 20, 2017 - 3:24 pm

Such demons deserve to be burnt as early as found .It’s sad that he spoiled her seven years but it’s gud she finally found the strength to get free

Reply
Yuvi Zoplus October 20, 2017 - 9:28 pm

I have just heard these things happen in which the father rapes his own daughter.
If a scream let her free after 7 years, I guess it was late.

Reply
Namratha October 20, 2017 - 10:51 pm

7 years! too long to be shackled. Sad tale. Though she managed to free herself with fire. I think she is burnt forever,

Reply
Mayuri Nidigallu October 21, 2017 - 5:28 am

A torture that comes to an end. Finally.

Reply
akshata October 22, 2017 - 5:28 pm

Thats a terrible thing- I recall reading about a few real life incidents where the father had imprisioned the mother and daughters. Glad she broke free

Reply
SHALINI BAISIWALA October 22, 2017 - 8:48 pm

Ugh! such demons ruin so many innocent lives without any remorse and She shouldnt feel any guilt or shame in doing it to make her life meaningful again!

Reply
Opinionated Mua October 23, 2017 - 8:00 am

I read an incident of a father doing this to his daughter for soo long, I teared up. But reading this, the scream reverberated in my me too. When will it be more spoken about and put an end too?

Reply
Pratibha October 24, 2017 - 1:23 pm

So sad and creepy .. death is the least worthy punishment for such people.

Reply
Anagha Yatin October 24, 2017 - 2:00 pm

Some lives are wasted at the hands of monsters. Oh, what a heart breaking tale.

Reply
Geeta Nair October 25, 2017 - 12:04 pm

Sad that today the protector turns predator. God save all from such perverts.

Reply
Rashi Mital October 25, 2017 - 1:54 pm

It’s horrendous to see fathers indulging in such activities when a father is considered the savior, the caretaker, the protector of his children. I wish she did what she did much earlier. Nevertheless, m glad she found the courage to break from the clutches. better late than never.

Reply
Gayatri Gadre October 25, 2017 - 4:04 pm

Heart-wrenching story, but glad you ended it on a positive note. I hope she finds her peace and her wounds heal with time
Gayatri recently posted Reunion – http://www.gayatrigadre.com/blog/reunion-photo-flash-fiction-fridayfotofiction/

Reply
Neha October 25, 2017 - 6:50 pm

That’s a painful saga. Some scars are forever.

Reply
Burning Bride #fridayfotofiction – alubhujia.com October 25, 2017 - 7:18 pm

[…] it with Tina and Mayuri for […]

Reply
Hiral Amodia October 25, 2017 - 8:38 pm

This is wonderful initiative!! I will participate in the coming weeks!!

Reply
tinabasu October 25, 2017 - 9:19 pm

Will be awaiting your story Hiral.

Reply
Dipika October 25, 2017 - 9:50 pm

Such demons should be burned alive. Thank God she got the courage and freedom from such torture.
Many such drmons are prowling around in shape of ‘trustworthy’ relations.

Reply
Lavanya October 26, 2017 - 5:01 pm

Such a scary story. The world is indeed a dark place if these monsters abound. Well written, Tina.

Reply

Leave a Comment

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.