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Flash Fiction – Who got the cookie?

by Tina Basu

The clank of the metal jar falling on the wooden floor startled Sia and Ella.


“Ohh…God… mom will be here any minute,  let’s clean it up”

They quickly picked up the cookies and stashed them back in the jar.

“The cookie crumbs!!!” alarmed Ella


“Wipe them… pick them up..”

“What was that sound?”asked mother from living room.

“Nothing… mama…”

“Hurry Sia… wipe them off” said Ella.

They could hear her approaching steps.

“What are you two upto?”

She looked around inspecting the kitchen floor.

“What did you two do now? What did you break?”

“Nothing” said the twins, together.  

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Written for Velvet Verbosity this week. And the word prompt for the 100 Word Fiction challenge was INSPECT
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8 comments

Nabanita September 26, 2014 - 4:17 am

haha so cute..Sisters do all kinds of stuff together but keeping a secret tops the list!

Random Thoughts Naba..Memories of School and Some More…

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bellybytes September 26, 2014 - 5:28 am

hmmmm. brings back memories of my own two girls who were upto mischief and refused to tell who did it!

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elly stornebrink September 26, 2014 - 6:54 am

Ha! Love this post for two reasons. My name is "Elly" (close to "Ella") and I used to go in the cookie jar when I was younger AND I was a twin. 😉 <3

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Tina Basu September 26, 2014 - 6:56 am

Hahah.., Elly.. Then this post is dedicated to you and your twin !!

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Tina Basu September 26, 2014 - 6:56 am

ohh yes…

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Tina Basu September 26, 2014 - 6:56 am

aww so cute..

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embarkwithmythoughts September 27, 2014 - 5:30 am

Cute and well penned Tina 🙂

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Rajlakshmi September 28, 2014 - 5:50 am

hahaha cute mischievious twins 😀

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