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What to do on a gloomy Sunday when you are down with cold and fever? Read books, stay warm and come up with a 55 Fiction! And that’s exactly what I did today. Before the antibiotics make me go back to sleep, I better write my post.
So here goes my post.
Read my earlier 55 Fiction here.
Happy Anniversary
Cake… check, candles…check, lights… out.
Ridhima hoped Mohit will be happy with the anniversary surprise…
He has been odd lately, but today she wanted him to be happy.
She opened the door with a smile but Mohit gave a wicked grin.
Before she could say Happy Anniversary a shining dagger was plunged into her heart.
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Linking this post as my Day 6 Post for Ultimate Blog Challenge July 2014.
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25 comments
aww poor girl!! loved the twist 🙂
Thanks Rajlakshmi
Now comes the twist. I was hoping for the simple love story again 🙂 But nicely penned.
Oh my! That was shocking! Not the anniversary surprise she was hoping for. Good twist!
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I wasn't expecting that knife. 55 fiction is a new concept for me 🙂
How sad! Poor girl. Nicely written 🙂
And it is an interesting concept Ana
absolutely not what any one would expect.
thanks Leo
Thanks Reema for dropping by
That was a surprise!
Oh what an anniversay gift 🙁 Tragic.
My UBC Day 6 Post
Didn't expect that — (hope you are feeling better)
Thanks Carol, I hope I'll be better by morning
Whoa! Tragic end.
awww poor girl 🙁 nicely written tina!
yeah it was
thanks Bhavya, yeah it is tragic
Thanks Swathi
Thanks Shail for dropping by
That was a morbid ending …. But nice narration and it had me hooked. 🙂
Thank you
55 Fictions is an interesting concept! Eagerly awaiting more mini-stories from you with more novel idea :-).
Pretty nice post. I just stumbled upon your blog and wished
to say that I've really enjoyed browsing your blog posts.
In any case I'll be subscribing to your feed and I hope you write again soon!
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I was browsing for some 55 fiction pieces and I came across your blog, loved the twist at the end.
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