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The Stalker
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This post is my entry for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction.
Word theme for the current week is ACHE.
Five sentence Fiction time again, and I just realized that i haven’t written anything after my last week’s FSF!!!
But something happens when I get these prompts.. I simply get a rush to write it down as soon as possible! I wish I did that for other posts too…
Anyways go ahead and read this one. Read the other ones here.
The Stalker
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| http://www.womenshealth.gov/violence-against-women/ types-of-violence/stalking.html |
But that’s what he had become, he followed Susan everyday from her tiny apartment till she walked to her workplace, and back to her place in the evening, but he made sure he kept a distance.
He couldn’t leave her walking alone in this Downtown area which was infamous for the street thugs, he still cared for her.
Susan seemed happy and lost in the world of addiction, she was completely consumed by drugs and it was evident from her face.
Ethan’s heart achedevery time he saw Susan in this state – he still loved his lady love, his sweetheart, his ex-wife, even two years after their bitter divorce.
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Leave a comment if you liked it and inspire me to write some more fiction.
12 comments
Blissful love of a man, has no reason but pure care always. Portrayed such a man so cute.
Thank you
Well written. It's tough to see a loved one destroy their life
Thanks Rajlakshmi… so true..
I loved reading how sincere your character was.This is what love is all about.
Ranu Thanks for this appreciation. I strive to give a depth to the characters I write about. It feels nice if readers connect to them.
That's not really a stalker so much as someone who is unable to let go. Perhaps one day she will come out of the darkness of addiction. Sadly, many do not.
Rose I wish people do come out of addictions… Ethan here is a lover and he still cares
Such despair for both of them. Well done!!
Thank you Lilllie
You can never forget true love … very vividly expressed … loved your choice of words !!!
Amrit thanks for your appreciation.