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100 Word Story – Let’s have some Romance, shall we?

by Tina Basu


So here is what I, sort of, learn’t today – Question Tags. Check out the new post on Write Tribe. Wiki says, a Question Tag is a grammatical structure where you turn a sentence in a question by adding an interrogative fragment. 

Today’s post is on the 100 Word Story on Saturday Prompt from Write Tribe and this post will have a lot of question tags!

Read my earlier short fiction posts here, won’t you?


Let’s have some Romance, shall we?

“This place is awesome, isn’t it?”

“Yes babes.”

“The blue waters outside… this serenity around us… it just feels like love is in the air”

“Come here babe? I don’t want you so far”

“The villa’s so cozy, the bed linens are so soft, it does feel like home, doesn’t it?”

Absolutely, that is exactly why I chose this tropical island for our honeymoon” said Nico while placing a soft kiss on his newly wedded wife.

“Mr. Husband you are getting romantic, aren’t you?”

“What else could I do when I have such a lovely bride”

“Love you my darling”



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Also linking this post as my Day 5 Post for Ultimate Blog Challenge July 2014.
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31 comments

Carol Graham July 5, 2014 - 5:14 pm

SOOOOO beautiful – both the words and the picture. Great job on the prompt

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Tina Basu July 5, 2014 - 5:15 pm

Thanks Carol, I am glad you liked it.

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LifeAsAConvert July 5, 2014 - 5:19 pm

That is a neat concept. I am not sure I could even write Romance with 5,000 words!

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Tina Basu July 5, 2014 - 5:20 pm

Thanks you, little fictions takes less time and that's what i like

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Vinodini Iyer July 5, 2014 - 5:20 pm

That was a lovely take on the prompt. Romantic and beautiful 🙂

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Tina Basu July 5, 2014 - 5:24 pm

Thanks Vinodini

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Swathi Shenoy July 5, 2014 - 5:39 pm

dat was such a romantic take on the prompt ♥

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Raluca L.C. July 5, 2014 - 5:39 pm

I loved reading this article! It is so romantic and that picture says it all.
Hugs,
Rally

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A July 5, 2014 - 5:42 pm

Aww!!! Such a sweet love story. For a while, I was expecting some sort of twist towards the end. But the simplicity and honesty of this one makes it all the more enchanting 🙂 Nice one, Tine!

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Tina Basu July 5, 2014 - 5:46 pm

Thanks Rally

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Tina Basu July 5, 2014 - 5:46 pm

Thanks Swathi

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Tina Basu July 5, 2014 - 5:47 pm

Thanks A, Yeah i wanted to keep it simple and romantic 🙂

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Sophie Bowns July 5, 2014 - 10:20 pm

Ah, I had a character called Niko.
😉
I really liked your short story!

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Leo July 5, 2014 - 10:20 pm

Simple and sweet 🙂 Liked it.

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Anita July 6, 2014 - 7:24 am

Romantic take, Tina 🙂

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Rajlakshmi July 6, 2014 - 11:52 am

now that's soooo romantic 🙂

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Tina Basu July 6, 2014 - 3:37 pm

Thanks Sophie

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Tina Basu July 6, 2014 - 3:38 pm

thanks. yeah sometimes simple things are sweet 🙂

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Tina Basu July 6, 2014 - 3:41 pm

Thanks Anita

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Tina Basu July 6, 2014 - 3:42 pm

Thanks Rajlakshmi, I'm glad hat you liked it

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sulekkha July 6, 2014 - 11:50 pm

Beautiful story and lovely picture to go with it 🙂

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Eloquent Mind July 7, 2014 - 2:07 pm

Lovely ! In fact we all prefer a nice homely feeling even when we are away from home. 🙂

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embarkwithmythoughts July 7, 2014 - 4:11 pm

Cute and simple. Liked it 🙂

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Huma Masood July 8, 2014 - 12:02 am

wow Tina…. so romantic … loved it…

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Shailaja V July 8, 2014 - 3:22 am

Nice incorporation of the tags 🙂

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Tina Basu July 8, 2014 - 4:55 am

Thank you Sulekha

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Tina Basu July 8, 2014 - 4:55 am

so true

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Tina Basu July 8, 2014 - 4:56 am

thanks

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Tina Basu July 8, 2014 - 4:57 am

Thanks Huma

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Tina Basu July 8, 2014 - 4:58 am

Thanks Shailaja

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vishalbheeroo July 11, 2014 - 2:17 pm

Every word is so romantic and lyrical. The perfect home for a sexy and romantic escapade:)

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