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This post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt SECURE.
Hello hello, it’s the first day of August and a breezy Friday night, which also happens to be the first day of my biggest blogging challenge ever…. writing every freaking day. If I can continue for a quarter (i.e. 3 months) without a drop I’ll be damned!!! Yeah like really… I have no idea what I’ll be writing though….
I wrote yesterday that I’ll try to post in the mornings but I was too caught up today, so am posting at this hour of the night! But luckily I am not that sleepy tonight… so hopefully my fiction tonight will make some sense!!!
Over to the fiction for Lillie & Write Tribe Pro Blogger
I Feel Secure
I sit trembling near the bench… I am almost drenched in the rain…
But I don’t see you anywhere.
You asked me to wait here… but you didn’t come back…
I wish I could make you realize I feel secure only when you are around, only when you pick me up, only when you love me… like the old times…
Am I so old and unwanted today that you abandoned me… Am I not your lil pup anymore?
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Also linking this to Write Tribe Pro Blogger Challenge as my Day 1 post
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24 comments
That's a lovely post, Tina! 🙂 How sweet..
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I die a little when I see animals who were clearly pets at some point of time being abandoned simply because they've grown too big or too old. We are such an uncaring insensitive species at times…sad story beautifully told as usual Tina…
Very moving. How one can be so cruel. Very beautifully written.
Looking into the innocent eyes , who has the heart to abandoned the pet? Surely an inhuman act.
Aww! That is so good and unexpected.
Aww.
Randy 😉 nice one.
Aw! Nicely narrated! 🙂
Thank you
Thank you… yeah its sad people have the heart to do such stuff
thank you Indira
so true… inhuman indeed… I have seen these things happening. Thanks for dropping by Kalpana
Thanks
thanks
thanks Aayesha
Poor pet! Good story, Tina.
Thank you for visiting my blog. 🙂
It's so heartbreaking when people abandon their animals, who depend on them to care for them. Thanks for shining a light on this sad event that happens all too often.
God bless you,
Cheryl
The first four lines reminded me of Hachiko except for the last line. Good one Tina. You conveyed the emotions in the picture so well 🙂
Awww, that just made me all mushy! Just look at that face. How can anyone say no to it?
You are welcome Vinitha
Thanks Cheryl for dropping by
Thanks
I know so bad of people to abandon them. it feels awful
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I am lost without you.
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