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Five Sentence Fiction – What do I do?

by Tina Basu

Should I accept it…or should I just tell him to buzz off?


She felt in her heart Aakash had serious feelings for her… but why her… is a question that lingered in her mind.


What was it in her that attracted the son of such a famous industrialist?  

She loved him from the moment they had met in college but she wanted to stay away from him… will he be always true to me… she didn’t want to be his spring muse.


It was time… he’ll enter the café anytime now…ohh these conflicting thoughts… what do I do? 


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This post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt CONFLICT.  

Also linking this to Write Tribe Pro Blogger Challenge as my Day 29 post
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14 comments

Rajlakshmi August 29, 2014 - 7:51 pm

I would love to know what happens after that. I could see story evolving here 🙂 Wonderful write.

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embarkwithmythoughts August 29, 2014 - 7:51 pm

An apt picture and yes, the 'why me' conflicts.. Well written Tina.

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Usha Menon August 30, 2014 - 5:27 am

The anxiety to know what was her decision is too strong. You have built the story very beautifully and left the readers guessing.

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cifar shayar August 30, 2014 - 2:23 pm

nice portrayal of conflict in the post

Dilemma

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Shailaja V September 1, 2014 - 12:33 am

For her sake, I hope she makes the right decision.

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Tina Basu September 1, 2014 - 7:20 am

Thanks Rajlakshmi… will build up on it some time

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Tina Basu September 1, 2014 - 7:20 am

Thanks

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Tina Basu September 1, 2014 - 7:21 am

Thanks Ushaji…. the answer might come in some other post!

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Tina Basu September 1, 2014 - 7:22 am

Thank you

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Tina Basu September 1, 2014 - 7:22 am

Yeah she will

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Anu Pat Ghanig September 1, 2014 - 2:52 pm

She should wait for some more time and study him…

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Uma September 3, 2014 - 4:32 pm

I hope she takes the right decision.

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Beloo Mehra September 5, 2014 - 8:59 am

What did she do? You must tell us 🙂

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Tina Basu September 5, 2014 - 11:43 am

hmmm.. let's see what she decides

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