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55 Fiction Friday – The Gorgeous Lady

by Tina Basu
Hello People, It’s Friday again, and I am here with a 55 Fiction this time. Every one’s gearing up for the weekend, and might be taking little light at work (like me). 

So I got some sweet and simple and short for today. I know last evening’s post was looooong. But its only 55 words today. So go ahead and enjoy.




The Gorgeous Lady 

“You here often? This hour?”

“Yes. You?”

“No… just tonight… fun with friends…
But must tell you Lady, you look gorgeous”.

“Yeah? No one’s told that in a long time”

“Varun you talking to air?” yelled Raj

“No… her…”, said Varun pointing towards her

“Ohh.. God where did she go! It’s just a split second!”
Image Source: Deviant Art, Digital Art: Amor e Morte by LadyDarkRaven

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Linking this post for Write Tribes Festival of Words. Today’s prompt is 55 Fiction. I came to know about it only on Day 3 so You can find my posts from Day 3 onwards.
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20 comments

sugandha March 7, 2014 - 7:03 am

Scary yet beautiful…

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Rajlakshmi March 7, 2014 - 7:03 am

A ghostly tale… Nice write

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Tina Basu March 7, 2014 - 7:08 am

Thanks Sugandha

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Tina Basu March 7, 2014 - 7:09 am

Hahha.. Thank you Rajlakshmi

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KParthasarathi March 7, 2014 - 9:02 am

Spooky but very nice

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Roshan Radhakrishnan March 7, 2014 - 9:02 am

nice one 🙂

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Tina Basu March 7, 2014 - 9:12 am

thank you KP

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Tina Basu March 7, 2014 - 9:17 am

Thanks Roshan

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Aarthy March 7, 2014 - 9:59 am

Spooky! The picture greatly enhanced the effect.

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Bhavya March 7, 2014 - 10:20 am

Good thought!

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Usha Menon March 7, 2014 - 11:12 am

Scary but very nice.

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Kalpana Solsi March 7, 2014 - 12:32 pm

spooky but loved it.

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Michelle Liew March 7, 2014 - 1:47 pm

Now that is scary!

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nibhz March 7, 2014 - 2:46 pm

creepy!!

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Tina Basu March 7, 2014 - 3:01 pm

thanks Aarthy

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Tina Basu March 7, 2014 - 4:14 pm

Thank you every one

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Jyotsna Bhatia March 8, 2014 - 2:53 am

Scary one !!

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Tina Basu March 8, 2014 - 4:46 am

Thanks Bhavya

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Tina Basu March 8, 2014 - 4:46 am

Thanks Michelle

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vishalbheeroo March 8, 2014 - 4:10 pm

I love such creepy stuffs. Well written Tina and love ur stories:)

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