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Does it happen to you sometimes when you are so tired after work that you just come home, eat and go off to sleep? I did the same some time back. But in the middle of my sound sleep I woke up and remembered I had not put up a post for the UBC!!!
First I thought – ohh let it be, i better get back to sleep…. and then the better part of the brain asked – do you really want to give up on the challenge? And the answer that it gave was obviously NO.
So waking up in the middle of the night to write a fiction. And here you go. Its about quarter past one now in the night and I am half asleep, I’ll read and check for spellings when I am in a better condition!
He noticed her everyday… same time… same place.
She always took this particular bus… there was something about her that’s so different from the rest at the bus stop.
She had a certain calm across her face… everyday. She stared at the road and looked oblivious of her surroundings – that’s what made her more beautiful… to Rehman.
Today he was determined he would speak to her.
His whispers from behind didn’t work… nor did the whistling… he wondered why she didn’t react?
He noticed her hearing aid only when she turned to get into the bus… was it not working??
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Linking this post to Velvet Verbosity for 100 Words Challenge on the prompt Whistling. Also it is my Day 18 post for Ultimate Blog Challenge.
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7 comments
Or maybe it wasn't turned on….on purpose? Intriguing. Alana visiting from UBC.
You have done a fabulous job for someone who was half asleep! This was quite different from the usual love stories 🙂 Good one, Tina!
I wanna know what happens next..well! No wonder she didn't look back:)
Your intro makes me smile..yest came home dead tired and thought will wake up after some time to do some quick edit for my pre-schedule post on Day 17. I ended up waking up in the morning. Finally, playing catch up.
http://vishal-newkidontheblock.blogspot.com/2014/07/an-orkut-love-story-chapter-18.html
Great take on the prompt Tina….I loved the read and want to know, is there another part of the story coming?
I liked the story
A story with a twist in the tale..Very well written.
nicely done with the twist 🙂 barbara from the 100 word challenge.