The clank of the metal jar falling on the wooden floor startled Sia and Ella.

“Ohh…God… mom will be here any minute,  let’s clean it up”

They quickly picked up the cookies and stashed them back in the jar.

“The cookie crumbs!!!” alarmed Ella

“Wipe them… pick them up..”

“What was that sound?”asked mother from living room.

“Nothing… mama…”

“Hurry Sia… wipe them off” said Ella.

They could hear her approaching steps.

“What are you two upto?”

She looked around inspecting the kitchen floor.

“What did you two do now? What did you break?”

“Nothing” said the twins, together.  

Written for Velvet Verbosity this week. And the word prompt for the 100 Word Fiction challenge was INSPECT

Tina Basu

8 Comments on Flash Fiction – Who got the cookie?

  1. bellybytes
    September 26, 2014 at 5:28 am (5 years ago)

    hmmmm. brings back memories of my own two girls who were upto mischief and refused to tell who did it!

  2. elly stornebrink
    September 26, 2014 at 6:54 am (5 years ago)

    Ha! Love this post for two reasons. My name is "Elly" (close to "Ella") and I used to go in the cookie jar when I was younger AND I was a twin. 😉 <3

  3. Tina Basu
    September 26, 2014 at 6:56 am (5 years ago)

    Hahah.., Elly.. Then this post is dedicated to you and your twin !!

  4. Tina Basu
    September 26, 2014 at 6:56 am (5 years ago)

    ohh yes…

  5. Tina Basu
    September 26, 2014 at 6:56 am (5 years ago)

    aww so cute..

  6. Rajlakshmi
    September 28, 2014 at 5:50 am (5 years ago)

    hahaha cute mischievious twins 😀


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