Should I accept it…or should I just tell him to buzz off?

She felt in her heart Aakash had serious feelings for her… but why her… is a question that lingered in her mind.

What was it in her that attracted the son of such a famous industrialist?  

She loved him from the moment they had met in college but she wanted to stay away from him… will he be always true to me… she didn’t want to be his spring muse.

It was time… he’ll enter the café anytime now…ohh these conflicting thoughts… what do I do? 


This post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt CONFLICT.  

Also linking this to Write Tribe Pro Blogger Challenge as my Day 29 post

Tina Basu

14 Comments on Five Sentence Fiction – What do I do?

  1. Rajlakshmi
    August 29, 2014 at 7:51 pm (5 years ago)

    I would love to know what happens after that. I could see story evolving here 🙂 Wonderful write.

  2. embarkwithmythoughts
    August 29, 2014 at 7:51 pm (5 years ago)

    An apt picture and yes, the 'why me' conflicts.. Well written Tina.

  3. Usha Menon
    August 30, 2014 at 5:27 am (5 years ago)

    The anxiety to know what was her decision is too strong. You have built the story very beautifully and left the readers guessing.

  4. Shailaja V
    September 1, 2014 at 12:33 am (5 years ago)

    For her sake, I hope she makes the right decision.

  5. Tina Basu
    September 1, 2014 at 7:20 am (5 years ago)

    Thanks Rajlakshmi… will build up on it some time

  6. Tina Basu
    September 1, 2014 at 7:21 am (5 years ago)

    Thanks Ushaji…. the answer might come in some other post!

  7. Tina Basu
    September 1, 2014 at 7:22 am (5 years ago)

    Thank you

  8. Tina Basu
    September 1, 2014 at 7:22 am (5 years ago)

    Yeah she will

  9. Anu Pat Ghanig
    September 1, 2014 at 2:52 pm (5 years ago)

    She should wait for some more time and study him…

  10. Uma
    September 3, 2014 at 4:32 pm (5 years ago)

    I hope she takes the right decision.

  11. Beloo Mehra
    September 5, 2014 at 8:59 am (5 years ago)

    What did she do? You must tell us 🙂

  12. Tina Basu
    September 5, 2014 at 11:43 am (5 years ago)

    hmmm.. let's see what she decides


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