Howdy people. Writing my 340th post today. Are you liking the recent series of fictions and musings that I am writing. Hope you are. 

So this month I’m going all out and have joined Ultimate Blog Challenge, Ultra Blog Challenge and NabLoPoMo apart from the other challenges that I keep doing time to time. Hope I can survive till I take a break in Aug maybe! 

Anyways today I thought of mixing several prompts for a little Five Sentence Fiction. First let’s get into the story and then will tell you about the prompts. 


Teddy was obedient, not a day went when he threw tantrums.

Today, he was all alone, like any other day, but today it was somber outside, Teddy was waiting, waiting for them to come back.

He was sleepy when he heard Blenda’s raspy voice from outside screaming for him… what was wrong?

Standing over the fallen leaves in the lawn Blenda kept calling for teddy, the house was up in flames and no way could she go inside… but tears of joy kept crawling down when she saw her little pup leaping out through the kitchen window.

Her Teddy was safe in her arms now.

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Post written for 
1. Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt – Flames.
2. Three Words Wednesday for the prompts – Obedient, Raspy and Sombre
3. A Prompt Each Day for the word prompt – Leaf

Linking this post to Ultimate Blog Challenge JulyNabLoPoMo July, and Ultra Blog Challenge July 


Tina Basu

15 Comments on Five Sentence Fiction – Teddy

  1. Rajashree Bhagwat
    July 3, 2015 at 7:13 am (4 years ago)

    Wonderfully articulated. The crisp five sentences indeed took me to imagining the scene. Wow!

  2. Kalpana
    July 3, 2015 at 7:13 am (4 years ago)

    loved it..

  3. WomanZie
    July 3, 2015 at 1:26 pm (4 years ago)

    Lovely and my love for dogs…

  4. Mandy Moore
    July 3, 2015 at 6:32 pm (4 years ago)

    cute little story, I enjoyed, thanks!

  5. Tina Basu
    July 4, 2015 at 5:25 pm (4 years ago)

    I love dogs too. So want a pet but I can't commit completely since none of us are home most of the time

  6. Tina Basu
    July 4, 2015 at 5:26 pm (4 years ago)

    Thanks Kalpana

  7. Tina Basu
    July 4, 2015 at 5:26 pm (4 years ago)

    Thanks Rajashree glad you liked it

  8. Tina Basu
    July 4, 2015 at 5:26 pm (4 years ago)

    Mine too I love dogs

  9. Tina Basu
    July 4, 2015 at 6:20 pm (4 years ago)

    You are welcome Mandy

  10. Kate Loveton
    July 5, 2015 at 1:13 am (4 years ago)

    You got me with this one – I'm a sucker for dogs! 😀 Fine story!

    Sigh… you wrote about dogs for the five sentence fiction prompt… I wrote about snakes. I think I like your animal choice much better! 😀 😀

  11. Tina Basu
    July 5, 2015 at 2:41 pm (4 years ago)

    Thanks Kate. I love dogs too


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