Hello guys, see I am being punctual for a change. My Thursday Five Sentence Fiction Prompt from Lillie’s blog just arrived in my inbox and here I am updating my post already. I like the moment when my mind starts thinking how to play with the prompts as soon as I get them. I so like prompts. 

People please let me know on some blogging challenges please, weekly or monthly challenges. You can also tell me about food blog challenges. In case you have not noticed I have a food blog as well which goes by the name Twinkling Tina Cooks. Challenges makes life interesting.

Okay now check out my this weeks Five Sentence Fiction and you ca read the previous posts here.

Over a cup of Coffee  

Frieda spotted a familiar looking face at the coffee shop, a face that she knew all her life, it was still the same, pretty and lively but now had a reading glass on and was dug in a book.

“Hi” she said as the pretty face looked up and stared at her through her reading glasses, it stood still for a moment but Frieda watched the eyes light up.

“Hi, long time” said Candice while pulling up a chair for her.

They chatted for several hours, the chat started out with single words and long silences but ended in girly giggles and consoling hugs like the old times.

The weekend stroll at the mall proved fruitful for Frieda, that silly misunderstanding over the college lad had kept the best friends apart for six years, but now they were back like old times and Frieda was happy she made the first move in all these years. 

Photo Courtesy: http://weheartit.com/entry/10127266

Word theme for the current week is MISUNDERSTANDING.
Lillie McFerrin Writes

Leave a comment below if you liked this short fiction and if you want me to write some more. Your words mean a lot to me

Tina Basu

17 Comments on Five Sentence Fiction – Over a Cup of Coffee

  1. Tina Basu
    February 27, 2014 at 7:16 am (5 years ago)

    Rajneesh ji.. Dhanyavad.

  2. Jyotsna Bhatia
    February 28, 2014 at 2:41 am (5 years ago)

    Good take on the prompt Tina 🙂

  3. Tina Basu
    February 28, 2014 at 2:55 am (5 years ago)

    Thank You Jyotsna

  4. Rajlakshmi
    February 28, 2014 at 6:52 am (5 years ago)

    ahh friendship did overcome all barriers 🙂 beautiful write

  5. Tina Basu
    February 28, 2014 at 9:07 am (5 years ago)

    Thanks Rajlakshmi

  6. Nabanita
    February 28, 2014 at 10:25 am (5 years ago)

    Even I have written about misunderstanding in friendship …Nice one Tina

  7. Robin Leigh Morgan
    March 1, 2014 at 10:37 am (5 years ago)

    I like the premise you've shown here, but I felt somewhat empty not knowing anything about the misunderstanding these two old friends concerning this guy.

  8. Tina Basu
    March 1, 2014 at 10:40 am (5 years ago)

    Thanks Nabanita

  9. Tina Basu
    March 1, 2014 at 10:52 am (5 years ago)

    Thank you Janaki

  10. Tina Basu
    March 1, 2014 at 10:53 am (5 years ago)

    Thank you Indira

  11. Tina Basu
    March 2, 2014 at 4:50 am (5 years ago)

    Hi Robin, I understand. Somehow here it was more about the friendship for me. May be next time I'll take care to put in lil more. Thanks for bringing in my notice

  12. Anita
    March 2, 2014 at 9:15 am (5 years ago)

    Always great when friendship wins over misunderstanding 🙂 Nice story, Tina.

  13. Tina Basu
    March 2, 2014 at 9:16 am (5 years ago)

    Thanks Anita, Yes it's always good to cherish true friendship than letting some misunderstandings creep in.

  14. rlyonsii
    March 4, 2014 at 5:40 am (5 years ago)

    Love seeing the completely different views people take on these!


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