Hello hello, it’s the first day of August and a breezy Friday night, which also happens to be the first day of my biggest blogging challenge ever…. writing every freaking day. If I can continue for a quarter (i.e. 3 months) without a drop I’ll be damned!!! Yeah like really… I have no idea what I’ll be writing though…. 


I wrote yesterday that I’ll try to post in the mornings but I was too caught up today, so am posting at this hour of the night! But luckily I am not that sleepy tonight… so hopefully my fiction tonight will make some sense!!! 

Over to the fiction for Lillie & Write Tribe Pro Blogger


I Feel Secure

I sit trembling near the bench… I am almost drenched in the rain…

But I don’t see you anywhere.

You asked me to wait here… but you didn’t come back…

I wish I could make you realize I feel secure only when you are around, only when you pick me up, only when you love me… like the old times…

Am I so old and unwanted today that you abandoned me… Am I not your lil pup anymore?

Source: http://www.care2.com
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This post is for Lillie McFerrin Writes Five Sentence Fiction for the prompt SECURE. 

Also linking this to Write Tribe Pro Blogger Challenge as my Day 1 post
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Tina Basu

24 Comments on Five Sentence Fiction – I feel Secure

  1. taleoftwotomatoes
    August 2, 2014 at 7:38 am (2 years ago)

    That's a lovely post, Tina! 🙂 How sweet..

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  2. fuchsiaoutbursts
    August 2, 2014 at 9:50 am (2 years ago)

    I die a little when I see animals who were clearly pets at some point of time being abandoned simply because they've grown too big or too old. We are such an uncaring insensitive species at times…sad story beautifully told as usual Tina…

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  3. indira mukhopadhyay
    August 2, 2014 at 12:45 pm (2 years ago)

    Very moving. How one can be so cruel. Very beautifully written.

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  4. Kalpana Solsi
    August 2, 2014 at 3:44 pm (2 years ago)

    Looking into the innocent eyes , who has the heart to abandoned the pet? Surely an inhuman act.

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  5. J M Cogdell
    August 3, 2014 at 12:49 am (2 years ago)

    Aww! That is so good and unexpected.

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  6. Tina Basu
    August 4, 2014 at 5:54 am (2 years ago)

    Thank you… yeah its sad people have the heart to do such stuff

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  7. Tina Basu
    August 4, 2014 at 5:54 am (2 years ago)

    thank you Indira

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  8. Tina Basu
    August 4, 2014 at 5:55 am (2 years ago)

    so true… inhuman indeed… I have seen these things happening. Thanks for dropping by Kalpana

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  9. Tina Basu
    August 4, 2014 at 6:11 am (2 years ago)

    thanks Aayesha

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  10. Vinitha
    August 4, 2014 at 7:41 am (2 years ago)

    Poor pet! Good story, Tina.
    Thank you for visiting my blog. 🙂

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  11. cshowers
    August 5, 2014 at 2:06 am (2 years ago)

    It's so heartbreaking when people abandon their animals, who depend on them to care for them. Thanks for shining a light on this sad event that happens all too often.

    God bless you,
    Cheryl

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  12. embarkwithmythoughts
    August 5, 2014 at 2:06 am (2 years ago)

    The first four lines reminded me of Hachiko except for the last line. Good one Tina. You conveyed the emotions in the picture so well 🙂

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  13. Shailaja V
    August 5, 2014 at 4:59 pm (2 years ago)

    Awww, that just made me all mushy! Just look at that face. How can anyone say no to it?

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  14. Tina Basu
    August 6, 2014 at 11:21 am (2 years ago)

    You are welcome Vinitha

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  15. Tina Basu
    August 6, 2014 at 11:24 am (2 years ago)

    Thanks Cheryl for dropping by

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  16. Tina Basu
    August 6, 2014 at 11:25 am (2 years ago)

    I know so bad of people to abandon them. it feels awful

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  17. VikToryArch
    August 14, 2014 at 5:19 am (2 years ago)

    I am secured with you.
    I am lost without you.
    Come back to me.
    Let's be together again; hear my plea.

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