I was thinking of writing a book review today but then came Lillie’s mail in my Inbox with this weeks prompt for Five Sentence Fiction. And I somehow felt I need to write it at once. 

As I told you a few days back I have started following Lillie and her Five Sentence Fictions, I am going to do my second one now. You can read my earlier attempt here. Go ahead and check this one out.


This week’s prompt is FROZEN.


Fate of Life

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Natalie woke up in the hospital bed and saw no one around.

Amidst the beeping machines and saline tubes she tried to look for Nathan but he was not in the room.

She tried to remember what had happened but her mind seemed blank when she heard the door opening.

Nathan walked in but his Frozen face gave away something was terribly wrong and Natalie started to panic.

“Darling don’t feel disturbed, God took our unborn child in His paradise, but don’t worry next time we’ll be more careful, we will definitely make a good family”.

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Word theme for the current week is FROZEN.
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Lillie McFerrin Writes


Leave a comment if you liked it and want me to write some more fiction.

Tina Basu

6 Comments on Five Sentence Fiction – Fate of Life

  1. sibi
    January 30, 2014 at 9:05 am (3 years ago)

    You conveyed so much in so few words…Good story

    Reply
  2. Tina Basu
    January 30, 2014 at 9:07 am (3 years ago)

    Thank you Sibi.. your words are encouraging 🙂

    Reply
  3. Ritesh Agarwal
    February 1, 2014 at 11:22 am (3 years ago)

    Hey Tina…weaving a story in so few words is an uphill ask….so, a nice job there

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  4. Tina Basu
    February 1, 2014 at 11:47 am (3 years ago)

    Thanks Ritesh

    Reply
  5. Tina Basu
    February 3, 2014 at 4:15 am (3 years ago)

    Thanks Neelam.. appreciate.

    Reply

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