What to do on a gloomy Sunday when you are down with cold and fever? Read books, stay warm and come up with a 55 Fiction! And that’s exactly what I did today. Before the antibiotics make me go back to sleep, I better write my post. 

So here goes my post. 

Read my earlier 55 Fiction here

Happy Anniversary

Cake… check, candles…check, lights… out.

Ridhima hoped Mohit will be happy with the anniversary surprise…

He has been odd lately, but today she wanted him to be happy.

She opened the door with a smile but Mohit gave a wicked grin.

Before she could say Happy Anniversary a shining dagger was plunged into her heart.

Source: theskyrimblog.ning.com


Linking this post as my Day 6 Post for Ultimate Blog Challenge July 2014.

Tina Basu

25 Comments on 55 Fiction – Happy Anniversary

  1. Rajlakshmi
    July 6, 2014 at 11:49 am (4 years ago)

    aww poor girl!! loved the twist 🙂

  2. Tina Basu
    July 6, 2014 at 11:50 am (4 years ago)

    Thanks Rajlakshmi

  3. Leo
    July 6, 2014 at 1:50 pm (4 years ago)

    Now comes the twist. I was hoping for the simple love story again 🙂 But nicely penned.

  4. Ana
    July 6, 2014 at 1:50 pm (4 years ago)

    I wasn't expecting that knife. 55 fiction is a new concept for me 🙂

  5. Reema D'souza
    July 6, 2014 at 2:52 pm (4 years ago)

    How sad! Poor girl. Nicely written 🙂

  6. Tina Basu
    July 6, 2014 at 2:53 pm (4 years ago)

    And it is an interesting concept Ana

  7. Tina Basu
    July 6, 2014 at 2:53 pm (4 years ago)

    absolutely not what any one would expect.

  8. Tina Basu
    July 6, 2014 at 2:54 pm (4 years ago)

    Thanks Reema for dropping by

  9. Carol Graham
    July 6, 2014 at 4:04 pm (4 years ago)

    Didn't expect that — (hope you are feeling better)

  10. Tina Basu
    July 6, 2014 at 4:06 pm (4 years ago)

    Thanks Carol, I hope I'll be better by morning

  11. Swathi Shenoy
    July 7, 2014 at 6:46 am (4 years ago)

    awww poor girl 🙁 nicely written tina!

  12. Tina Basu
    July 8, 2014 at 4:51 am (4 years ago)

    thanks Bhavya, yeah it is tragic

  13. Tina Basu
    July 8, 2014 at 4:58 am (4 years ago)

    Thanks Shail for dropping by

  14. Eloquent Mind
    July 8, 2014 at 6:11 am (4 years ago)

    That was a morbid ending …. But nice narration and it had me hooked. 🙂

  15. Antara Kundu
    July 10, 2014 at 7:43 am (4 years ago)

    55 Fictions is an interesting concept! Eagerly awaiting more mini-stories from you with more novel idea :-).

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