Hello People, It’s Friday again, and I am here with a 55 Fiction this time. Every one’s gearing up for the weekend, and might be taking little light at work (like me). 

So I got some sweet and simple and short for today. I know last evening’s post was looooong. But its only 55 words today. So go ahead and enjoy.

The Gorgeous Lady 

“You here often? This hour?”

“Yes. You?”

“No… just tonight… fun with friends…
But must tell you Lady, you look gorgeous”.

“Yeah? No one’s told that in a long time”

“Varun you talking to air?” yelled Raj

“No… her…”, said Varun pointing towards her

“Ohh.. God where did she go! It’s just a split second!”
Image Source: Deviant Art, Digital Art: Amor e Morte by LadyDarkRaven

Linking this post for Write Tribes Festival of Words. Today’s prompt is 55 Fiction. I came to know about it only on Day 3 so You can find my posts from Day 3 onwards.
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Leave a comment below if you liked the 55 Fiction and you want me to write some more.

Tina Basu

20 Comments on 55 Fiction Friday – The Gorgeous Lady

  1. sugandha
    March 7, 2014 at 7:03 am (5 years ago)

    Scary yet beautiful…

  2. Rajlakshmi
    March 7, 2014 at 7:03 am (5 years ago)

    A ghostly tale… Nice write

  3. Tina Basu
    March 7, 2014 at 7:08 am (5 years ago)

    Thanks Sugandha

  4. Tina Basu
    March 7, 2014 at 7:09 am (5 years ago)

    Hahha.. Thank you Rajlakshmi

  5. Tina Basu
    March 7, 2014 at 9:17 am (5 years ago)

    Thanks Roshan

  6. Aarthy
    March 7, 2014 at 9:59 am (5 years ago)

    Spooky! The picture greatly enhanced the effect.

  7. Bhavya
    March 7, 2014 at 10:20 am (5 years ago)

    Good thought!

  8. Usha Menon
    March 7, 2014 at 11:12 am (5 years ago)

    Scary but very nice.

  9. nibhz
    March 7, 2014 at 2:46 pm (5 years ago)


  10. Tina Basu
    March 7, 2014 at 3:01 pm (5 years ago)

    thanks Aarthy

  11. Tina Basu
    March 7, 2014 at 4:14 pm (5 years ago)

    Thank you every one

  12. Tina Basu
    March 8, 2014 at 4:46 am (5 years ago)

    Thanks Bhavya

  13. Tina Basu
    March 8, 2014 at 4:46 am (5 years ago)

    Thanks Michelle

  14. vishalbheeroo
    March 8, 2014 at 4:10 pm (5 years ago)

    I love such creepy stuffs. Well written Tina and love ur stories:)


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