Everything about this Easter was wrong.


This is not how little Sean spent his Easter Sundays.

He remembered how last year he hunted Easter eggs along with his sister, mommy’s special lunch, how the entire family enjoyed together in the house… their house.


He wiped off the lone tear that rolled down his cheeks.

He didn’t like this place… he wanted to be with his family.

Little Sean looked outside his window up in the clouds


“Dear God, I don’t like it in here, please give me back my mommy and my daddy. Please bring my sister back to me”

Copyright – Kelly Sands

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100 Word Story written for Rochelle Wisoff Fields Friday Fictioneer on the photo prompt. 
And Day 14 Post of UBC July 2014.
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Tina Basu

12 Comments on 100 Word Story – On the Easter Sunday

  1. Nicole
    July 14, 2014 at 5:12 pm (2 years ago)

    Cool idea to write a story in 100 words but it makes me want to read more. 🙂

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  2. Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
    July 14, 2014 at 11:58 pm (2 years ago)

    Dear Tina,

    Welcome to Friay Fictioneers. A very sad story, makes me wonder what happened to little Sean's family.

    shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. Tina Basu
    July 15, 2014 at 4:44 am (2 years ago)

    Thanks Dannii

    Reply
  4. nanclairefalkner
    July 15, 2014 at 4:44 am (2 years ago)

    Dear Tina, Great story but so sad. What happened to Sean's family? It had to be something awful for him to be missing his parents, sister and his happier way of life. Poor kid. Welcome to Friday Fictioneers – glad you're here! Nan 🙂

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  5. Tina Basu
    July 15, 2014 at 4:44 am (2 years ago)

    Thanks Nicole

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  6. Tina Basu
    July 15, 2014 at 4:45 am (2 years ago)

    Thanks Rochelle for dropping by, I intend to extend this story in the next 100 word post.

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  7. Tina Basu
    July 15, 2014 at 4:49 am (2 years ago)

    Thanks Vishal

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  8. Tina Basu
    July 15, 2014 at 4:51 am (2 years ago)

    Thank you so much Nan.

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  9. P.S. Joshi
    July 15, 2014 at 4:23 pm (2 years ago)

    Tina, Good story and well written. Very sad. I'll be waiting to read the next episode. Well done. 🙂 —Susan

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  10. Anita
    July 15, 2014 at 5:46 pm (2 years ago)

    Sad one, Tina.
    Stormy life without family…

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