Ohh you have finally come… I have been waiting… just for you.
Count your days Anderson Jr, I won’t let you stay here for long.
I have not let anyone.
You and your father didn’t care about me, you never heard my cry, my plea…
It was a fun Sunday outing for you two… but what about me??
You made me a show piece on your wall… and then dumped me at this corner in the store room.
I have waited for twelve years… a soul trapped in this body…
I didn’t spare your dad… now I won’t spare you.
14 Comments on 100 Word Story – I’ll not Spare you
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Nathaniel Kidd
July 20, 2014 at 3:02 am (4 years ago)🙁 That little guy does not look happy and I do not blame him. Thanks for sharing.
Judy Yaron
July 20, 2014 at 3:03 am (4 years ago)LOL! Tina! So cool! Poor little ram … it's a ram, right? I saw this photo on another post, with a different tale (tail …) that I didn't quite get, but I now realize that this is part of another challenge! What fun you must be having.
Thanks for the chuckle! HUGS <3
Huma Masood
July 20, 2014 at 3:03 am (4 years ago)short n scary paranormal……
Usha Menon
July 20, 2014 at 10:54 am (4 years ago)Very scary tale., but nicely woven.
Lily Leung
July 20, 2014 at 11:50 pm (4 years ago)Sounds very vengeful. Watch out!
Lily
annehiga
July 21, 2014 at 3:07 am (4 years ago)Oh! That's creepy!
abodeofhorus
July 21, 2014 at 1:02 pm (4 years ago)Spooky ! 🙂
abodeofhorus
July 21, 2014 at 1:02 pm (4 years ago)Spooky! 🙂
camgal
July 21, 2014 at 2:41 pm (4 years ago)Very creepy. Good work.
sarahannhall
July 22, 2014 at 1:34 am (4 years ago)A great set-up for a much bigger revenge story – nicely done.
P.S. Joshi
July 22, 2014 at 12:20 pm (4 years ago)Tina, My first comment has disappeared. You might check your Spam filter as it does that sometimes. My comment was something like: Good story and well written A vengeful soul is a dangerous thing. I agree that this would be a great beginning for a longer story. Well done. : ) —Susan
nextpagenewchapter.com
July 22, 2014 at 9:29 pm (4 years ago)A well-written, creepy story. I'll admit I had to laugh that such a dark story was posted on a blog entitled, "The Sunny Side of Life." 🙂
Shailaja V
July 23, 2014 at 5:19 pm (4 years ago)Creepy and spooky all at once. Guess the men had it coming 🙂
Sun
July 28, 2014 at 1:41 am (4 years ago)you put together a frightful and well told story, Tina. guess revenge was the ultimate choice for this character.