Ohh you have finally come… I have been waiting… just for you.


Count your days Anderson Jr, I won’t let you stay here for long.

I have not let anyone.


You and your father didn’t care about me, you never heard my cry, my plea…

It was a fun Sunday outing for you two… but what about me??

You made me a show piece on your wall… and then dumped me at this corner in the store room.

I have waited for twelve years… a soul trapped in this body…

I didn’t spare your dad… now I won’t spare you.


photo prompt from Friday Fictioneer. Source Copyright – Adam Ickes


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This 100 words Fantasy Fiction is my entry for the Friday Fictioneer Post for Rochelle’s Blog  on the photo prompt.
Linking this post as my Day 19 Post for Ultimate Blog Challenge July 2014
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Tina Basu

14 Comments on 100 Word Story – I’ll not Spare you

  1. Nathaniel Kidd
    July 20, 2014 at 3:02 am (2 years ago)

    🙁 That little guy does not look happy and I do not blame him. Thanks for sharing.

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  2. Judy Yaron
    July 20, 2014 at 3:03 am (2 years ago)

    LOL! Tina! So cool! Poor little ram … it's a ram, right? I saw this photo on another post, with a different tale (tail …) that I didn't quite get, but I now realize that this is part of another challenge! What fun you must be having.
    Thanks for the chuckle! HUGS <3

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  3. Huma Masood
    July 20, 2014 at 3:03 am (2 years ago)

    short n scary paranormal……

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  4. Usha Menon
    July 20, 2014 at 10:54 am (2 years ago)

    Very scary tale., but nicely woven.

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  5. Lily Leung
    July 20, 2014 at 11:50 pm (2 years ago)

    Sounds very vengeful. Watch out!

    Lily

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  6. annehiga
    July 21, 2014 at 3:07 am (2 years ago)

    Oh! That's creepy!

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  7. camgal
    July 21, 2014 at 2:41 pm (2 years ago)

    Very creepy. Good work.

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  8. sarahannhall
    July 22, 2014 at 1:34 am (2 years ago)

    A great set-up for a much bigger revenge story – nicely done.

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  9. P.S. Joshi
    July 22, 2014 at 12:20 pm (2 years ago)

    Tina, My first comment has disappeared. You might check your Spam filter as it does that sometimes. My comment was something like: Good story and well written A vengeful soul is a dangerous thing. I agree that this would be a great beginning for a longer story. Well done. : ) —Susan

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  10. nextpagenewchapter.com
    July 22, 2014 at 9:29 pm (2 years ago)

    A well-written, creepy story. I'll admit I had to laugh that such a dark story was posted on a blog entitled, "The Sunny Side of Life." 🙂

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  11. Shailaja V
    July 23, 2014 at 5:19 pm (2 years ago)

    Creepy and spooky all at once. Guess the men had it coming 🙂

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  12. Sun
    July 28, 2014 at 1:41 am (2 years ago)

    you put together a frightful and well told story, Tina. guess revenge was the ultimate choice for this character.

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