“You can open your eyes Jenko”

“No… no… I will fall”

“You won’t fall”


“I can feel it… why did you bring me here? I want to go home, mommy”

“Jenko… open your eyes… you won’t fall… trust me… mommy is here”

“See you are here… next to mommy… and your sitting all secured here”

“I will not fall right?”

“Absolutely not. Now look there can you see what’s there outside?”

“No… I don’t want to look there… but…what are these??? Mommy are those tiny little houses for tiny little men?”


Rona smiled, Jenko’s first flight was becoming smooth gradually. 
   
PHOTO PROMPT- Copyright Rochelle Wisoff-Fields


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This 100 word story is in response to the photo prompt at Friday Fictioneer
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Tina Basu

18 Comments on 100 Word Story – First Flight

  1. nanclairefalkner
    August 5, 2014 at 7:18 am (2 years ago)

    Dear Tina, Cute story and reminds me of one of my sons' first flights. He was scared – and I was probably more scared, but had to put a brave face on for his sake. Off to the right of the plane, there was a tornado on the ground in St. Louis, Missouri, USA, and the plane was tossing back and forth and I told Steven, "Whew this is fun!" So, he thought it was too. Love your story of Jenko's first flight. Great job! Nan 🙂

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  2. Nabanita
    August 6, 2014 at 4:29 am (2 years ago)

    Aaa that was a sweet story… I'm still scared of flying but I try to not let my mind think…

    Wonderful use of the prompt

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  3. P.S. Joshi
    August 6, 2014 at 5:12 am (2 years ago)

    Tina, Lovely story of a mother building confidence in her son about his first flight. Well written. : ) —Susan

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  4. Usha Menon
    August 6, 2014 at 5:27 am (2 years ago)

    Nice story.The first is scary for most of the people

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  5. Usha Menon
    August 6, 2014 at 5:27 am (2 years ago)

    Tina, this is a nice story. Every one gets goosebumps in the first flight.

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  6. Tina Basu
    August 6, 2014 at 9:15 am (2 years ago)

    Thanks Rochelle

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  7. Tina Basu
    August 6, 2014 at 9:28 am (2 years ago)

    thanks Nan. I remember my mother telling me i howled like crazy on my firs flight – but i was some months old, that's the saving grace.

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  8. Tina Basu
    August 6, 2014 at 9:29 am (2 years ago)

    Thanks Nabanita

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  9. Tina Basu
    August 6, 2014 at 9:30 am (2 years ago)

    Thanks Susan. Glad u liked it

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  10. Tina Basu
    August 6, 2014 at 9:31 am (2 years ago)

    thanks Usha ji

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  11. Tina Basu
    August 6, 2014 at 9:31 am (2 years ago)

    thanks Usha ji

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  12. Mondrak
    August 6, 2014 at 10:01 am (2 years ago)

    Awww I love that. I remember seeing little houses on my first flight. It was a round trip in a little Cessna.

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  13. R Miglani
    August 7, 2014 at 4:15 am (2 years ago)

    Hey this is a beautiful story ,
    This is my first time at your blog and its really a template to start with.,

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  14. Kalpana Solsi
    August 7, 2014 at 10:43 am (2 years ago)

    Jenko's anxiety is well understood and his affectionate mom is pacifying him. A lovely story of a mother-son relationship.

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  15. Lucy Conrad
    August 12, 2014 at 5:46 pm (2 years ago)

    Well done. Actually, that wasn't a child on the plane–that was me. Lucy

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